Pages

Friday, 24 July 2020

Writing T3 W1

For today's work I have to read the fairytale Hansel & Gretel and write a part for Hansel & Gretel, we have to write 9 sentences. Here are my 9 sentences


Suddenly, in the clearing. They spotted a house with an unstable roof, a sugar-coated chimney, glistening windows and a door. Coated with … sweets! They knew they shouldn't touch the house, but the sugar-filled candies tempted them. They knew they shouldn’t lick the sweet house, but the colourful candies lured them closer to the house. They knew there could be consequences; the minty smells were poison to their innocent souls.



Thanks for reading my 9 sentences.

No comments:

Post a Comment

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post